Sunday, September 2, 2018
An Ominous Sense of the Numinous
Mosquitoes startle from unseen places at the edge of the pier
They are gatekeepers; walk through them without fear
A forest gave its bones for your feet, it warms your toes
Wavelets hone the star that shifts your skin to deeper tone
Ringing flesh to play the dreams lapping at your craft
Tied secure on this shallow, green, and golden draft
Upon Fairyland's backyard, upside down and blinding.
Something simple for this morning...something about getting lost in surfaces, perhaps. Linking with The Sunday Muse for Muse #19 and with Poets United for Poetry Pantry #418. Having a second glass of coffee (iced...it's still warm here, although with any luck, it'll rain a bit today) and plotting to sprinkle the beds that have just been cleared with pumpkin seeds. One season, I will grow actual pumpkins!! How else will I ever get to write about a ball?
Well, as it turns out, the rain decided to start early. This is a tiny patch of green in the midst of yellow (it's the side of the yard where puddles form) and I thought the tiny flowers were lovely. I'm not going to object to volunteer blooms in the middle of a hot and hotter summer. :)
Hoping everyone has a wonderful week and a productive & peaceful one. :)
-- Chrissa
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I love the idea that forest gave up its bones for our feet. Wow! I enjoyed your commentary as much as the poem. Do grow pumpkins and write about a ball. I love the fairyland in your poem. Tell us more.
ReplyDelete"A forest gave its bones for your feet, it warms your toes"
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely intriguing line
Happy you dropped by my Sunday Standard Tricia
Much🍾💛love
I love the rich and primal imagery that leads up to golden storybook afternoon.
ReplyDeleteSome intriguing linger-worthy lines in this beautifully crafted piece. A pleasure to read.
ReplyDeleteA lovely bit of fairy tale afternoon. Don't wait to grow pumkins to write about a ball!
ReplyDeletea delight to read.
ReplyDeletethere is a sense of calm in the poem (despite the mosquitoes).
I deeply love what your poem says!
ReplyDelete"A forest gave its bones for your feet, it warms your toes" this line gave me shivers! Powerful write 💜
ReplyDeleteBeautifully captured "fairyland" scene filled with the richest of unique details!!
ReplyDeleteSo many wonderful lines in this short poem Chrissa! I love them all! You have painted a magical scene with your words! 🌷😍
ReplyDeleteShort, but it packed a punch, Chrissa. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful...
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