Sunday, February 23, 2020
Strange Diet
He speaks a crude language, one of rocks and paper
One of frangible ego, always needing some honey
To lick the wounds closed. And so I come here.
He cleared these woods; he built nothing in return.
I asked for something because I can't walk the emptiness.
This bench is a full stop, a fool's stop, perhaps.
I don't mention the wolf, closer every day.
I bring a book and read; ants crawl beside me,
Dust blows in the sunlight like curtains, billowing.
His mansion is emptiness.
The wolf runs the ragged edges until I come.
I read the book until he's close and then
I open the newspaper and read him blood.
It's a strange diet, this meat of human cruelty.
And yet, it satisfies him. I read myself empty
And walk home.
Sharing the above with The Sunday Muse and Poets and Storytellers United for their Sunday poetry rounds. I've been catching up on my notes this week and hoping that--at some future point--they will coalesce into something rich and strange. Or at least something with a beginning, middle, and end. I hope this week finds you well and your reading & writing ready to hand. :)
-- chrissa
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Ooooh! That's all really great. "always needing some honey
ReplyDeleteTo lick the wounds closed." And this -- "It's a strange diet, this meat of human cruelty."
Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThe emptiness displayed here is brilliantly done Chrissa! You have such an amazing talent to dig deep into the image and take us there eloquently! Stunning and both heart stirring and thought provoking all at once. I love this!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant opening:
ReplyDelete“He speaks a crude language, one of rocks and paper
One of frangible ego, always needing some honey
To lick the wounds closed.”
Too many fabulous lines to quote. I absolutely loved it!especially "I cant walk the emptiness." Bravo!
ReplyDeleteI can't walk the emptiness...but we do, every day.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteRich and strange and wonderful. Brava!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderfully dark and eloquent, Chrissa! I especially like; "It's a strange diet, this meat of human cruelty." It truly is.
ReplyDeleteIt was a very visceral pleasure to come upon this poem on my rounds today, contrasting as it does with the many other takes on this picture. Your imagery is striking, the pace is ominous and excellent, leading the reader into the narrator's inner life and imaginings, --and the mostly absent "he' described through his actions/non-actions is very evocative as well. My favorite line tho is : "...I asked for something because I can't walk the emptiness." Just a gem of a poem, and so glad to have found it.
ReplyDeleteBest thing to say: I couldn't find a bad line. Great write.
ReplyDeleteI'm struck by the lines "I can't walk the emptiness" and "I read myself empty and walk home" Speaks of gun-wrenching loneliness, as opposed to thoughtful solitude. Being an eternal optimist, I keep looking for a bright spot in the pathos, which is so well depicted.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing piece of imagination! Beautifully expressed, and all too believable – as a dystopian possibility, or a metaphorical inner landscape.
ReplyDeleteOMG what a closure
ReplyDelete"It's a strange diet, this meat of human cruelty.
And yet, it satisfies him. I read myself empty
And walk home."
Happy Sunday Chrissa, thank you for dropping by my dumie Sunday today
Much❤love
Well done with the prompt/prop
ReplyDelete"I can't walk the emptiness"
ReplyDelete"It's a strange diet, this meat of human cruelty."
Two incredible lines in this strange, futuristic poem.
Some fantastic lines in this powerful piece of writing. I agree with other commenters: 'I can't walk the emptiness' … is stunning … a line, I have to believe … with an indelible echo.
ReplyDeleteWow! That really got to me. Chills. I love your closing lines in most of your poems and this one: It's a strange diet, this meat of human cruelty.
ReplyDeleteI wish we were more akin to nature instead of being so cruel and careless with it. Sadly we are not and even have no respect for our own kind either. We are a creature that just cannot learn to fit in!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant opening, fantastic closure and all wonderful in between. And it gave me the chills too, yet I was compelled to read it again and again.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I'm drawn into this story of wolf, wood cutter, and the person in between the two, growing thinner trying to placate both.
ReplyDeleteThe last two lines of the second stanza gave me pause. They images are just so appropriate for the times we are living in. Today's newspapers are always bleeding.
ReplyDeleteHe cleared the woods, and built nothing in return, he speaks in rocks and paper. I first thought of the child's game, rock, paper, scissors, but then of the commodity driven marketplace where it's all about the game. Stocks and bonds, and returns on investment. Wood, becoming paper. And she invests her time with the wolf. The one that waits on her to be fed. I love how she switched from books to paper... almost as if she is feeding him to the wolf. And freeing herself.
ReplyDeleteOh wow! I love this! It is a strange diet, this human cruelty, and like processed food these days the servings seem to be getting larger and larger.
ReplyDeletelove love love this!! Too many favorite lines to single one out. You rocked it!
ReplyDeleteLOVE! "I asked for something because I can't walk the emptiness.
ReplyDeleteThis bench is a full stop, a fool's stop, perhaps." I love that the bench represents the wasted forest, but gives the speaker a way in to its life; I like being drawn into the scene by the ants, etc, so by the time she is reading to the wolf it feels natural. Magic realism. SO sorry what we have to share with the animals is blood! You have captured this so beautifully!
May I share this on FB?
Delete"I read myself empty" an exhaustive tale. A wonderful depiction of the pic.
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