Sunday, September 29, 2019
We Forget So Much
My grandparents tell me about the scientists, late at night
When the heat sighs under the door
About how the world believed that thinking and caring
Could be given over to others
But that world drowned and we play on the floor
Of the ocean that was
All of us, while the adults polish the last bright dish
Filling with hope from somewhere
Else.
The scientists knew about water, about oceans, fish
But none of that belongs to us
It was paid for to be hidden, to be resold to us
By the hope whispered
Into the dish we keep clean...as if there were gods
Say my grandparents
My parents say that we need to be careful, to walk
The sands with them, slowly
That the water will come when the disk is perfectly cleaned
Like a sun rolling down to us
It will shine a path directly through our eyes and wrists.
Height won't let them forget, nor will they abandon us
To the myth of scientists.
For me, poetry isn't a full conversation. It's the spark that will land upon what tinder exists in the reader. So what this isn't is a full and careful philosophical proposition that a certain thing is good or bad and what we should therefor do. Maybe it's something that worries me.
Sharing today with The Sunday Muse and Poets United.
-- Chrissa
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Your third and fourth line tell the sort of truth that everyone should be quite conscious of, but we both know that isn't the case. The same goes for note. So many worrying happenings out there... I wonder how future children will speak of it, when the time comes.
ReplyDeleteWe play on the floor of the ocean that was all of us. I love that line.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line as well!
DeleteFilling with hope from somewhere else -- I especially like that idea, as we all need hope from somewhere!
ReplyDeleteI love your imagery and phrasing, and most of all how you inspire thought and encourage discussion without assumptions or "certainties". Just honest openness. A sharing of what is inside us, and a responsibility, should we choose to accept it, to do so.
ReplyDeleteI like that hope still whispers in times of darkness. When the water and fish are gone what fables with society try to sell to the youths of the times?
ReplyDeleteI wonder how much we put our trust at the mercy of others who are only pretending to care. I wonder if will continue to preach hope in something else than what's real when we are the elder.
ReplyDeletegreat imagery
ReplyDeleteThere is a great story evolving in your beautiful words Chrissa. I am longing for more. Brilliant writing as always!
ReplyDelete"By the hope whispered into the dish we keep clean...as if there were gods," ... oh yes! Such an eloquent write!
ReplyDeleteCalled to mind sunken cities and buried civilizations. Evocative.
ReplyDelete"When the heat sighs under the door
ReplyDeleteAbout how the world believed that thinking and caring
Could be given over to others
But that world drowned ..."
very provocative writing!
An engaging reflective piece. And I loved your philosophy that poetry is 'the spark that will land upon what tinder exists in the reader'. THAT IS BRILLIANT!
ReplyDeleteBut that world drowned and we play on the floor
ReplyDeleteOf the ocean that was
All of us, while the adults polish the last bright dish
Filling with hope from somewhere
Else.... that is lovely!
How gentle yet alarming!
ReplyDeleteI love the sense of myth and folktale you have created here
ReplyDeleteThe floors of the oceans...a sad tale. A sad, sad tale.
ReplyDeleteI like "the heat sighs under the door" and how that world drowned. I fear the tale and others like it are premonitions.
ReplyDeleteLove this and love your note. Poetry is a piece in the puzzle. My best hope is that what I write will grow a conversation.
ReplyDeleteI paused at the same lines Magaly did...and shook my head. I have to hope that conversations will be started between the generations, and that we can hold space for each other's fears and truly address them before things get much worse.
ReplyDeleteYour lines, "It was paid for to be hidden, to be resold to us
ReplyDeleteBy the hope whispered", are mysterious. We pay for many things in one way or another. Your poem so magically sends different thoughts and images to my mind.
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