Sunday, September 22, 2019

The Apple Tree


There's still a house there, and before the house
There was that apple tree
And it's dusty and full and the fruit's growing old
But its still, probably, sweet

And that apple tree blooms and then sets it fruit
And we drive through, eyes on the street
And the families keep changing but not just there
But we think we still see their sheets

I don't know where that first garden grew
Not right down my street
But abandoned gardens and houses left behind
Are all I know of Eden

I'm older now and this is the yard
But where is the green?
All I've got left are the souvenirs, relics
Of the garden we've seen.

The apple tree brings the fruit to the scheme
And the snakes are brought by the weeds
I'll bring the guileless, wisdomless teeth
And rumors can flame through the screens

Hope y'all are having a good week! We had a surprise...hurricane? Tropical storm? last week, which really doesn't seem like it should be a thing but is, apparently. We were fortunate to just receive the rain and none of the flooding on my street while the it felt like the city was drowning once again. Which, I suppose, when we were able to get out and run around again, gave me fresh eyes, checking to see where water lingered and what made it through, checking the creek obsessively and worrying about our local library, and noticing an apple tree full of fruit in an abandoned (or possibly just temporarily deserted) yard. And then the image above. And there's a story there more than a poem...there's a power who's just pulled a relic from a flood and the land is drying all around but the music isn't playing and the birds aren't flying and there's just the sun and the smell of wet sinking down around the foundations and the way you think you remember something but it just doesn't break through the present haze. Or maybe that's just me.

-- Chrissa

16 comments:

  1. There is a melancholy of loss flowing here indeed. A deep and wonderful write Chrissa!

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  2. "But abandoned gardens and houses left behind
    Are all I know of Eden"

    these are such powerful but sad lines. it really pulls at the heart, and after rereading the poem again, there is a feeling of melancholy and helplessness, that in these strange times, nothing seems normal again.
    yes, i think you selected a super image to accompany this poem.

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  3. I loved best the lines quoted by dsnake. A wonderful read, both poem and notes.

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  4. I wonder how much of paradise we only will know when it's lost.

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  5. A great sense of belonging and comfort in this poem

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  6. Interesting how everything seems like a souvenir at a certain point in life. So much more to look back on than forward to I guess, is the truth. We have to honor what we knew.

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  7. Interesting. Before I read your explanation, I thought of it as a trip back in time to one's childhood neighborhood -- seeing what was still there and what had changed. But after reading your explanation I saw the melancholy as well - the things that changed so quickly due to the hurricane. A moving photo as well.

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  8. I love how the apple tree is the hope-driven companion through this piece. Wonderful imagery throughout.

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  9. I find the image of the apple tree soothing through this write. The tree was there in the beginning and still remains after the storms of life. I think Eden might appear differently through another lens.

    I too wonder what is normalcy today?

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  10. A pleasure to read … with its compelling cadence and rhyme/near rhyme, throughout. I thought the way that you came upon a scene and took it in a unique and unexpected direction … that, I think, is the stuff of authentic creativity.

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  11. Lovely writing – both poem and back story.

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  12. This carried me back to my last visit to my "belonging place". Little farmhouses deserted, barns falling down, fencerows removed, an occasional apple tree or sprig of tiger lilies to mark what used to be. So sad.

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  13. It's as if they both have come back and don't really recognize the place... I like the whole bit about the apple tree!

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  14. Chrissa, "I'll bring the guileless, wisdomless teeth
    And rumors can flame through the screens, speaks volumes. So many words are spewed through wisdomless teeth.

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