And I kept in my pocket the green letters and icing;
that cake that never got smaller.
If only they'd told me, the bakers that sold it
about the apples beneath.
Golden apples for life and poisoned for death
bitter for faces and...these
All the apples underneath.
And I sold for the locket the unending cake
that never was eaten at all;
I sold for the face of a foregone beloved
hope of nothing, well-gnawed.
And still unknown, still concealed, still sweet
red apples gleaming
in the far, far beneath.
Oh, how perfect they are, how unbitten
are the red apples beneath
And how sharp in the shearing illusion
are my beloved's teeth.
Good grief, I have a terrifying thought that I've written a poem that...is about Twilight. Honestly, I'm not sure. I just had this image of buried apples much more potent than the apples of the Hesperides and...you know, there's just no excuse. Apples are always going to be dangerous.
Sharing this week with the much saner than I poets of The Sunday Muse and Poets and Storytellers United. Come read widely and well!
-- Chrissa
These lines are pure magic my friend!! With a punch packed ending I love!! Your after note made me chuckle! I always love your notes at the end! Wishing you a peaceful and book-filled week Chrissa!
ReplyDeleteApples - from Genesis to Alice and her wonder lands, ever present. The excuses just as intriguing
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Outstanding writing - especially hooked by that second stanza.
ReplyDeleteJimmy Webb who wrote 'MacArthur Park' and so many other amazing songs would have a field day with this poetry. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Maybe humming it ????
ReplyDeleteUneaten cake. Unbitten apples. What a picture of hopelessness you have painted!
ReplyDeleteAdam bit the apple, and Johnny carried its seed all over. I wonder at the conversation if Adam and Johnny Appleseed sat down for tea! (Sorry, my brain took a side trip there!)
ReplyDeleteSomber to encouraging thoughts those apples were hiding. I peeked under your cake and could not get even a whiff of a rotten apple. I'm wondering if your longer search might have found a few?
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Worry not! Because what this one brings to mind, in my case, is Neil Gaiman's "Snow, Glass, Apples" which is way cooler than the sparkling alternative.
ReplyDeletePommes de terres, roots that run deep.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing poem Oh those attractive dangerous apples buried in a cake
ReplyDeleteWell this is gorgeous! Apples are so loaded with magic and possibilities
ReplyDeleteI revelled in the dark fairy-tale feel of this ... and then couldn't help giggling at your note about Twilight.
ReplyDeleteLOL, Twilight was not in my mind at all when I read this. I thought of bad bargains, of deals made without reading the fine print, and how by the time you know it there's not much left of the soul to object.
ReplyDeleteAs I was reading I thought of the symbolism of apples throughout time. They can be good and evil depends on their use. I kept thinking of snow white and the evil queen with her poison apple.
ReplyDeleteApples are a source of literary and historical inspiration...sharp teeth and apples go together.
ReplyDeleteAn apple a day... no, wait.
ReplyDeleteThere seems that there was an intention that was replaced with regret.
While treating apples with suspicion reminds us to be wary of just about everything. Trust no one but be wary of everything.
ReplyDeleteloved this dark poem.
ReplyDeletethis is scary, a clean, good-looking face to the world, and an inside that's all messed up. :(
All apples promise (or threaten) to keep the doctor away. Dead people don't need doctors.
ReplyDeleteAwesome work!
Such fairy tale spell you have woven.
ReplyDeleteIt feels like a fairy tale, a spell. Oh how apples can mislead. Love it!
ReplyDeleteNow I am thinking of all the bad apples I've known or heard about.
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