Sunday, November 11, 2018
The Heat You Hold
I never asked for the way your hands came together
Fingertips like match heads struck beneath the pines
Where the smoke stalks the clouds
I never asked for the fire that keeps us afloat
Above the water, above the cold, above the clay
When a clap snaps us from our seats
Hallelujah racing through our throats and chests
Above the cement rows, amphitheater of our days
Wicks to luminaries along your path
While you walk down the only flickering aisle
From altar of Once, to altar of Time, to light Eternity
With the heat you hold.
Sharing with The Sunday Muse for Muse #29 and with Poets United for Poetry Pantry #428. Not sure where this one came from, so I'll just take it as a gift after being chilled a little too much yesterday while walking around a local Renaissance festival. Sometimes Texas is a little cooler (and more damp) than expected. Hope everyone has a great week & finds spare writing time. :)
-- Chrissa
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Th fingertips like match heads, smoke stalking the clouds, and th "fire that keeps us aflost".....all so wonderful!!!!
ReplyDeleteThat i the only, the best fire. It's good to remember the good of the heat because California is burning again. These images are so very positive.
ReplyDeleteWell wherever it came from, I am glad you got it down on the page...really loved it!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
And what it gift it is. The tender passion is warming, soothing, promising... Love the energy of it, the way it feeds the words.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing in this stunningly visual piece. The word crafting here, really is mesmerizing.
ReplyDeleteI love this and agree with Wendy, the wordsmithing is incredibly potent💞
ReplyDeleteI really can see and feel this poem. Bravo for good image-making!
ReplyDeleteYou created a wonderful, warm poem with great images.
ReplyDeleteSo many wonderful lines in this Chrissa! I love the way you had a theme of faith in your lines. Absolutely stunnning!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful lines in here, Chrissa. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteI love it.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful
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