Today's WordCrafter prompt is futuristic, with the suggestion of a poem/story/etc. taking place in the year 2051. Carrie has picked out a cool image--I love the domes, the suggestion of traffic, the warm tones, the potential trees in the near distance. It makes me think of college, of museums, of the way the world used to look when the future might be shinier than right now. It's the promise that we'll clean it up as we go, like kids picking up their rooms before leaving for vacation or before going to sleep. While these towers and moons calm me, the poem that speeds through is not...exactly...the promise of a fantastic future in a place where red and orange are the colors of a healthy environment. Just out of curiosity--would that be nerve-wracking for someone who grew up on a relatively blue planet? Instead, here is
Church of the Shark
The way man behaves we could wither dry. I love the wisdom and forgiveness of the shark and the vision of prayers blowing upward. Your excerpt of thoughts is eloquent and a wonderful stepping stone to this magnificent poem!
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